The Locked Room
Landlord rented to
tenants with a locked room in memory of their dead son.
Roger Ling rented a shared bedroom with Anand in Sungai
Petani in the state of Kedah. The master bedroom was rented to a married couple
but the third room was locked. The uncle and aunty (Mr & Mrs Lee) told that room was securely locked and it was
their dead son’s room. The tenants were told that room had many sweet memories
for them and were warned that they under no circumstances would they be allow
from going to that room.
Mr & Mrs Lee also mentioned that their daughter has been
persistent that they should stay with her. Their daughter argued that with them
there it will be easier to look after them especially if they are sick.
Over the next few months nothing really happened except
Roger and other tenants heard faint shuffling & squeaking sounds especially
at nights. They thought it must be rats or some rodents in the house.
One day Roger woke up
in the late morning and as expected all tenants have left for work. As Roger is
a student in a local college and that day he had afternoon classes. Roger went
to the bathroom to brush his teeth and followed up with a quick shower.
As he was walking to his bedroom his mobile phone started to
ring with his usual ring tone. He turned and looked down to mobile phone with
the charger connected to it. The charger with its wires was there but the
mobile phone was not there. Thinking he must have left the mobile phone in the
bathroom, he rushed to the bathroom.
Typical Mobile Phone
As Roger was walking to the bathroom he suddenly realized
the ring tones was coming in the side. He turned his head….the ring tones was
coming from the locked bedroom!
Robin phoned the landlord couple to inform of the latest
incident about his mobile phone. The
landlord sounded annoyed and said that Robin was mistaken. However the couple
could not come until their daughter gets back from work.
Robin & all his roommates were there that night when the
older couple and their daughter finally arrived. The locked bedroom was not
just locked by the usual key method but it was securely bolted with a steel
chain with a combination lockset.
They were waiting patiently while Mr Lee “sudah bising”(angry
nagging) while busy unlocking the bedroom. As it was late the bedroom light was
turned on, everything seemed normal but….the mobile phone was sitting on the
bed!
What's scary is that a good story can be spoiled by lousy attention to details and carelessness.
ReplyDeletePlease lah. If you wish to be a good storyteller, at least do get the names right k.
First it was Roger, then it was Robin. Different characters is it?
And 'Roommates' and 'housemates' are different. Please google to check on the difference.
That said, it's just criticism on your writing, not on you.
Do continue to write. It's interesting to read the articles.