Followed Ghost Hunter
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An amateur Ghost
Hunter was shocked that ‘something’ followed her home!
Molly was a 17 year old who likes to follow her friends
looking for haunted houses in their home town of Kota Tinggi in the state of
Johor, Malaysia. Especially after SPM (a government exam) they were just bored and
just wanted excitement besides Molly was naturally interested in the
supernatural.
One night Molly and a group of her friends went to a derelict
abandoned old folks’ home on the outskirt of town. It was pitch black when they
finally found the exact location, it was a 2 storey bungalow with a rusty padlock
hanging loose about the gate. They drove their car onto the small lane beside
the old bungalow.
They made the way to the garden which was terribly overgrown
with weeds and plants when some of them finally suggested that they will wait
for them there. Molly and her friend, Rajoo, were furious with their suggestion
and for changing their minds at the very last minute. Their pleas and threats fell
on deaf ears as they were adamant that will only wait at the car.
Nevertheless Molly and Rajoo crept silently into the
abandoned bungalow with their flashlights which only provided them with lights
which were unfortunately not bright enough. They went through the broken front
door and slowly went into the front hall, which were fill-up with broken
furniture, weeds and with eerily massive cobwebs on the ceiling and walls.
They made to the kitchen which was located at the side of
the bungalow when suddenly Molly heard a faint giggling sound from the front
hall. Thinking it was her friends, Molly grabbed Rajoo and rushed to the front
door but found nobody there. As Molly yelled at her friends not to play the
fool she had a quick glimpse of shadows of a movement moving very fast up the
staircase. Molly and Rajoo pounded up the stairs but found their friends were
not there.
Later they were told by their friends who were waiting
beside their car that they were busy chatting and they did not go anywhere. Molly
thought it was just her imagination running wild and as such did not make too
much of the incident.
Molly lived with her parents together with her elder
brother, Eric, and sister, Cynthia. After a week from the incident, she noticed
that things were not exactly right at her house. There were furious arguments
between family members and especially between Eric and Cynthia. Being the
eldest boy and girl they were close and had a loving sibling relationship but
instead now they were fighting like dogs and cats, as if they could not even accept each
other.
Even the house pet, a family cat named Tabby, had many weird
and unexpected incidents. Tabby as usual would be busy grooming herself when
she suddenly looking up and she will be frightened out of her mind. Tabby arched
her back hissing all the while looking at a certain spot in the room. Then she
would zoom away and be out of there at breakneck speed heading for the safety
of Molly’s parents room!
The final straw came about when one night, Molly was
watching TV alone in the living room. During the commercial break she went to
kitchen for a glass of water when suddenly she felt something or somebody viciously
yanked at the back of her hair. The tugged of her hair was so hard that she
fell on her back and she let out a piercing scream. The rest of the family
rushed out to the living room when they heard her scream wondering what was
wrong. They discovered Molly was lying on her back sitting dazed and they anxiously
asked what is going on.
After hearing Molly’s recollection about her latest incident
they were horrified when they found a chunk of hair including the roots on
lying on the floor tiles. Molly’s parents decided immediately that they should
call their Catholic priest the very next day.
The Catholic priest was fairly young and inexperienced as when
he attempted to bless the entire house with incense, holy water together with
Latin verses from the bible. The priest tried twice but he was unsuccessful to
get the unwanted spirit to leave their house and out of the family lives. The
young priest seemed like he was disorientated and a bit confused. The priest
pleaded with Molly’s parents to try and find another house however that was not
possible as they could afford to buy another house.
The young priest finally found another retired priest who
was willing to help with their problem. The young priest and selected church
members drove the old priest from his home at a nearby town. The older priest
went through the rituals and finally after a whole night, he was happy to
announce that the spirit was gone. The family members were so relief, they can
feel the atmosphere were lighter that the darkness were gone. Although Molly
was also elated but she can’t feeling wondering…will it be back?
Disorientated. Is that anything to do with datorientated? And the family heard her scream, "Wondering what was wrong." And they found her lying on her back sitting dazed. Please, lah. Everything has to do with vocabulary, sentence construction, and consistency when you write.
ReplyDeleteEven your vocab sucks, and yet you dare comment.
DeleteNeedless to say, you stories are very, very entertaining and reflects how we take to the language. Write more, ah.
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